Talk:Lupus

From Ashland Wiki

Your page needs editing for grammar. There are a number of grammatical errors. Try to avoid the long lists. That information would be more interesting in paragraph form even if you have to leave out some of the detail. You need to add a lot more references. Check the assignnment for the minimum number of a required references. If you are going to cite a wikipedia page, link to that specific page. Your current research section does not cite any references. Good start but it still needs some significant work. --Mposner 11:18, 4 December 2006 (EST)